Monday, October 31, 2011

Two Rights Make a Wrong

1,000 words written, which I count as a major miracle considering I got two...Count them...TWO rejections today.
And it's not the kind of rejections I'm used to, which is the query rejection ("No, I don't want to read your work"), which I don't really count as a full rejection considering they have no idea what I can actually do, but the kind of rejections I got today were off full submissions, so I tend to take those a little harder.

Yes, it's well written.  Yes, it's quick paced and takes place over a short time span.  Yes, there's action, adventure, romance, and very little socieo-dynamics.  Yes, it's a hot topic, but no, I don't want to write the whole book based on the first twenty pages.

It's about escape and recovery.
It's not about suffering.
I wrote a book about suffering once and I was depressed the whole three years it took me to write it. NO THANK YOU!

The sad part is, is that the agencies are correct, and I am correct at the same time.  Nobody is WRONG here.  They wanted it to be something other than I do, and it's a clear difference of opinion.  That's all.  No hard feelings.  No me getting mad at them for being WRONG, because they're not.

It's such a craps shoot to find someone who wants the book to be the same thing the writer wants it to be.  Such a complete and utter matter of LUCK.

Argh.
Frustrating.

And on my 2nd favorite day of the year too...

Boo.

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Inches

500 words and one short battle sequence closer.

Not bad for a day I decided to play hooky from my computer.

Here's the link to thank for today's inspiration: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qi5EiCgQKuw
I dare you to listen and NOT see an epic battle between good and evil.

Monday, October 24, 2011

Battle on the Brain

I'm buried up to my eyeballs in battle sequences.

So...very...slow...

Argh, so much thinking...

My brain hurts.

LATER:
1,600 words done.
One battle scene closer.

Friday, October 21, 2011

Word Battles

I wrote today.
Not much.
I did a lot of staring at the screen, thinking.

But things were written (about 1,000 words) and plans were made, so I'm going to take it as a victory and hope I can make a better dent next week.

Battle scenes are so slow!
Argh.

Thursday, October 20, 2011

Eureka!!

I was driving the kids to karate class on Tuesday afternoon when a thought occurred to me.  I knew what was missing from the outlines to Book 2 & 3 of The Line series.

Huzzah!

I'd known on an intellectual level what needed to be added, but I had yet to figure out what it WAS, exactly.  Yes, it needed to be more intimate.  Yes, it needed to be more about Naya's internal struggle. Yes, it needed to include the grandiose action adventure, but it also needed all the rest to blend in.

And then, it HIT me.
Being as I was driving, and my kids were in the car with me, and we were in the middle of an intersection (yes, I remember the exact spot I had the epiphany), I snatched the little Tinker Bell pad of paper from my purse pocket, and a pen from my car dashboard, and had my 10 year old take dictation.

Now, mind you, this is not a book with 10 year old themes, so I had to (how shall I say?) paraphrase and abbreviate some of the more inappropriate aspects of this revelation, but it worked nonetheless.

Plus, not only did I have the revelation, but I exhibited incredible self control and SAT on it for two days (literally, it was in my back pocket), so I could germinate about it even more.
This is impossible for me.
I am a pop and snap kinda gal.  I think of something, I do it then so I don't forget. I'm THAT kind of person.  It explains a lot about me, just ask my friends and family.

And what did all that germinating produce?

Two whip-smacking awesome book outlines that make sense, are intimate, personal, action packed, romantic, and so, so cool.

I'm genuinely excited.

Now, if only one of the agencies currently reading "The Line" would ask to view these outlines (hint, hint, hint) it might prove helpful in their decision making process.

Just an idea.

Good grief, it's past noon.
I should probably get dressed.

Yippee!!
**Happy Dance**

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Death, Taxes, and Emails

Miracles of all miracles occurred today, I got caught up.

I actually finished all my work, and had some free time in order to write.
I spent a good two hours reading and revising and polishing what I've got so far on "The Beast Reign."
It felt tremendously good.

Mind you, at the end of the two hours, I had 10 emails waiting for me, so I hadn't really been caught up for very long, but kudos to me for shutting my email 'ping' off so I didn't notice I had emails until I wanted to.

Desperate times call for desperate measures.
All is fair in love, war, and writing.
до вхат ые нед то до.

Friday, October 14, 2011

Stock Tip

The good news is my day job is going really well.  The bad news is, it's going SO well, I've been too busy to write.

I am admitting defeat.
I'm going back to writing at night.

I feel sorry for my cat, who will violently protest not being able to sit on my lap while I crochet and watch T.V. after the kids go to bed.

I feel sorry for my husband, who will (not violently) but mildly be annoyed at how I am not there to fast forward all the commercials for him while he works on his lap top with his feet propped up.

I feel sorry for my dog, because no one else seems to realize that when she's standing at the back door, she needs to pee. (I can't see the back door from my office)

But I most certainly DO NOT feel sorry for myself.  I'm just a little (not sad, not depressed) disappointed?  Disappointed in myself for not being able to run the house, do my job, buy the groceries, clean (what's that?), take care of my kids, AND write.

My advise to you?
Buy stock in Privat Kaffe, it's a German coffee company and I'm absolutely addicted to their Mild Arabica, because I'm about to start buying it in bulk.

LATER:
Good day for starting from the beginning and doing some polishing.
Very productive.
Might want to hold off on that coffee tip...

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Ransomed

This is getting ridiculous.
I'm being held hostage by my email account.

No more waiting.

I've got a book (or two) to write.

Determination: The ability to see past challenge, rather than stare at it...

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Creative Thinking

I haven't gotten much writing done the last few days.  For one, I'm still fluttering all over the place.  But on the other hand, my mind has been rushing in circles over the outlines for Book 2 and Book 3 of "The Line." Thematically they have me thinking...

I remember attending a break out session at last years SCBWI's Summer Conference where a published author was warning the attendees to "protect your thinking time."  During the session, I thought that seemed a little obvious, but now I understand what she meant.

There are revisions to be written, emails to be sent, self-promotion to be done (Tweeting, blogging, Facebooking), my day job, my kids, my husband, grocery shopping, a vomiting cat, and a geriatric dog who keeps eating herself, gross...A sequel to be written, a package to be shipped, dishes to be washed, a meeting to attend, kids to be chauffeured...

When do I have time to just think?
In the car?
In the shower?
Right now?

And the problem with me is that I never just decide, okay, RIGHT NOW, I'm going to stop everything and think.  Go!

Would that even work?

I keep waiting for some revelation to come to me at random points during the day, but my mind is too cluttered to hear it.
Ultimately, I know there needs to be some major revisions done on my time management if I'm going to make my life, career, job, family, house, EVERYTHING, work.
Because I don't mind confessing, that as of right now, it certainly ain't working creatively.

Now if only I could find a way to get Naya's personal struggle to mirror the political struggle within Auberge...Now, that would be creative.



Friday, October 7, 2011

Along for the Ride

What a roller coaster ride this week has been.  Thank goodness for Heidi Horchler and her guest post, otherwise you guys would have had nothing from me to read this week.

I can't go into detail, and I can't give you specifics.
Just know that my quest to obtain a hard core NY Lit Agent (at the suggestion of my book to film agent SIDE NOTE: No, still no word yet on that), has heated up tremendously this week and it's been a complete roller coaster ride of 'yeses,' 'no's,' 'maybes,' and 'let me think about its.'

One minute I'm giddy as a kid on Christmas morning, the next I'm reminding myself to think practically and calm down, then I'm writing into the wee hours on requested outlines and materials, or arriving to pick up my kids late so I could send an important email, the next I'm driving over to a girl friend's house for a pep talk because I'm convinced it's never going to happen...Up and down. Up and down. Up and down.

I think those that have been aware of the actual specifics are getting tired of my mood swings. I appreciate your indulgence.

I sat down this morning and tried to write more of "The Beast Reign" but my mind is fluttering all over the world like a butterfly and I can't concentrate to save my life.

Up and down.  Up and down.
Please bear with me.

Thursday, October 6, 2011

Why You Should Attend a Writer's Conference - Guest Blog By Heidi Horchler

Having recently attended a regional writer's conference, with the speakers' words still buzzing in my head and the buzz from my Starbuck's French Roast still twitching through my veins, I knew exactly the topic I would choose when Anne so graciously asked me to guest post here at Will Write for Coffee: attending writing conferences.

So, you get this urge every time you walk past the office supply section at Target. A vortex sucks you in and forces you to stand there in front of the notebooks. You don't need a notebook. You have two at home that are half full, and you just bought one last week. It has birds or curlicues or robots on it. It's sitting on your night table, pen uncapped at the ready, just waiting for those middle of the night brainstorm ideas that you know you'll lose if you don't jot them down, RIGHT NOW. But, you think, I'd better grab this one with the kittens on it, to make sure I have a spare. 

You know who you are.

You still have a copy of your first Judy Blume book (Tales of a Fourth Grade NothingAre You There, God? It's Me, Margaret? the racy Forever??) You've saved all of your favorite picture books and now read them to your kids. You have an idea for a story *POP* into your head at the most inopportune times, but you write them down. Maybe you even have a manuscript or two.

Now what?

You open your favorite picture book to the publisher's page, scribble down the address on a manila envelope, shove your story in there along with a cover letter that reads:
"To whom it may concern,
This is an awesome story about a teddy bear who learns to bake cookies and has a friend who is a bullfrog named Jeremiah. My kids love it! My son even drew the pictures!
I hope you like it!
Signed,
Clueless."
No, I'm not being mean or snarky, because that's pretty close to the same thing I did for my first submission. In return, I received a very concise, polite photocopy of a response they send out to all the hapless wanna-be writers out there which said, in a nutshell,
"Thanks, but no thanks." 
If that's enough to deter you, if it was just a whim, and a Hail Mary shot, then good for you for trying and you can stop reading now. But if that "Thanks, but no thanks" got your hackles up and made you more determined to give it a go, read on.

1) Join a critique group. You can usually find one at your local library, school, or even online.

This is very scary, because now you will have to take all of those great little ideas out of your notebook and share them with about 5-10 strangers who will rip them apart. But that's good. Don't get defensive; rather, be a sponge and absorb what you learn, and don't be afraid to "kill your darlings." Be mature enough to accept critique, and give constructive criticism in return.

2) Always use proper format.

No Futura, no Helvetica (I know, I know), and for sure no Comic Sans. When printing your manuscript, even for your critique group, always, always, always use
Times New Roman*, 12-point font; double-spaced; one-inch margins (left, right, top, bottom).
This is an industry standard, and the sooner you start utilizing it, the better. The reason? While I'm not 100% sure, it's said that the serifs in the font make it easier for the eye to flow from one letter to the other; 12-point double-spaced font is just easier to read, and the one-inch margins are to allow room for editorial comments in the margins.
*The only exception would be Courier font, which is more commonly used in screenplay manuscripts.

3) Get your hands on a copy of The Writer's Market.

The library will usually have a reference copy (one that stays in the library and cannot be checked out), and there will often be a copy that you can check out as well. If your focus is writing for children, or if you are an artist or illustrator, there is the Children's Writer's and Illustrator's MarketI cannot stress the indispensable nature of these books. If you study either or both of them the way your kids study YouTube or Facebook, you will have an amazing head start.

The first half of The Writer's Market books contain information on: how to write a query letter; format; selling to magazines; interviews with authors, including how they sold their first book; and advice from agents, many of whom will speak to what sort of material they currently need. The second half of the guide is a directory of agents, publishers and editors, what they represent or publish, and how to submit your work to them. Current is the key word here−although you will find useful information in second-hand copies, the publishing industry changes so rapidly that you will want to find the newest version available.

4) Attend conferences, and join writer's organizations.

It's worth the drive to your nearest city; it's worth the $150-on up registration fee. Plan ahead and save your money. The knowledge that you will gain and the acquaintances you will make−personal and professional−are worth it. For children's writers or illustrators, find your regional Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI) chapter, and attend whatever events you can. (More organizations listed below.)

In the past four years that I have attended our regional conference−and I'm not even talking about the whopper events in L.A. and New York−I have heard and/or met editors from: ScholasticRandom HouseAmulet/AbramsChroniclePenguinFarrar, Straus & GirouxHarper Collins and more. I've had a face-to-face critique with an editor from Roaring Brook. I've heard first-hand advice from agents on what they are looking for and how to submit. I've seen presentations from art directors on how a picture book is made. What catches an editor's eye and will keep them reading the next 20 pages, or make them toss it.

I've also made some very good friends, and seen a few fellow writers go on to publication.

If you offer to volunteer, it will not only give you a chance to help out, you will have the opportunity to meet more people. Remember, it's not only about learning, it's also about networking.

But besides learning about the industry and how to navigate it, the best residual effect of a conference is the motivation. Nothing will light a fire under your butt more than hearing the first-hand story of how a successful book made it from notebook to publisher's auction to print.

This year we were treated to the story of Tom Leveen's YA novel, Party. There to tell the tale were Tom, his agent Jennifer Mattson, and his editor at Random House, Suzy Capozzi. Tom told us the story of how he wrote Party, Jennifer talked about how the two of them worked together on it, the process of presenting it to editors, and Suzy explained what takes the book from a point of interest, to a sale, and the final product. It was incredibly interesting, and brought the entire experience down to a more realistic, maybe even attainable level. By the way, I got a copy of Party at the conference, started reading it that night, and couldn't put it down until I finished it two days later. The last book that did that to me was The Hunger Games. So, bravo, Tom, and thank you.

Attendees were given a workshop on how to pitch a book, and an opportunity to have their manuscript read and critiqued by one of the faculty, among other demonstrations.

More highlights of this year's conference were: a discussion on ideas that stand out from Amulet and Abrams books senior editor Maggie Lehrman, presentation on picture book format, from Simon & Schuster associate art director, Lauren Rille; and a lesson on marketing and publicity for today's writers, by industry pro Tracey Daniels of Media Masters Publicity, who also revealed a new project called Bookigee, a completely new way to look at books, and the movies, music and everything else connected to them.

In short, writing a book isn't just about the writing anymore. Sure, the writing has to be there−and has to be better than ever to compete in the market of today−but the whole experience of a book is changing. Not only to people want to read the book, they want to hear podcasts, read interviews, use interactive apps, go to events, and tweet all about it.

In order to get your awesome idea from scribbled notebook to the bestseller list takes more than just throwing a manila folder in the mailbox. It takes research. Not only in your subject matter, but in the publishing industry, social networking and marketing as a whole.

If it's one thing that stood out to me from the whole day, it was the idea that we, as conference attendees and SCBWI members were one step ahead of Joe Q. Writer, in preparing ourselves for the ultimate goal of publication.

So go, buy that notebook, kittens and all. And put a change jar on your counter with a sign taped to it that says "WRITER'S CONFERENCE." Whenever your kids swear, or forget to do their chores, charge them a dollar - you'll have it saved up in no time.

Sisters in Crime - Mystery writers

Authors I've met through SCBWI:

Authors I've met through library-hosted critique:

Not to mention Anne - but I've known her since way before any of this writing stuff :)

Many of these people are the ones who've taught me what I've learned so far, and what I've attempted o pass on to you. I hope you will find wisdom and inspiration in their lessons, as I have. 
Now get your notebook and start writing!


Heidi can be found online here:

Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Steve Jobs Commencement Speech

Steve Jobs commencement speech: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0OJBLquzPqk

We'll miss you, Mr. Jobs.

The Halloween Warm Up

Halloween is my 2nd favorite holiday (and I use that term loosely) besides Christmas.  Because of this, I tend to start obsessing about it quite early.

In order to appease my love of Halloween, I listen to spooky music.  Now, as many of you may or may not know, I was a classical violinist in my youth (yes, I even played professionally for a time), but my hands gave out and I had to choose between typing or playing, so I chose typing (and don't regret it for one moment).  But that also means my love for music extends not only to various types of Alt Rock, but classical as well.  And heaven help the artist who combines classical instruments with Alt Rock (Tori Amos & Florence & The Machine)...I tend to play them a little too much.

And now that you're here, and reading this, I suggest you listen to the following link, it might get you in the mood for the impending holiday and give you a teeny weeny bit of culture ta-boot.  The recapitulation (the finale) at the end of the song (@ 5:10- 6:22) is quite awesome!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LupmmElMoI

P.S. No writing today. Wednesdays are a half school day and there's no point in getting started unless there's a full day to do it. I ran errands instead.

Monday, October 3, 2011

Writer in a Desk Store

A writer in a desk store is a lot like a kid in a candy store.  Or a reader in a book store.  Or a hand bag whore (me) at T.J. Maxx.

As many of you may or may not know, I work at my dining room table.  Part of the reason is because I like the view out my front window, but it is also because there is only one desk in this house and the home desk top computer sits upon it, and the desk is small, made of pressed plywood, and is in a closet.  Not exactly a conducive location for creativity. At least, not for me.

So apparently, after YEARS of my complaining to my husband that I had no real place to work, he eventually got tired of looking at my mountains of piles of papers on the dining room table, and for my birthday this year, the blessed man bought me a desk.

A real desk.
A Victorian desk with scrolled feet.
What can I say? The man KNOWS me.
I'm so excited I could puke, and I'm even being sarcastic.  I plan on sitting at my desk for the first time and reading "Persuasion" by Jane Austen and dying from happiness.  That's the plan.

Anyways, I am absolutely beside myself with giddiness because the desk is due to arrive today.

LATER:

As I'm writing this blog, the delivery truck arrived!
The wonderful and outrageously solid desk is in the box, in my garage, and it's too big and too heavy for me to get inside the house all by myself.  So even though I'm impatient beyond my wildest dreams, I have to wait until hubby gets home from work so we can muscle it inside.

I should be writing today but I'm bouncing off the walls.
This is what Christmas morning used to feel like.
You don't get that feeling as an adult very often.
I think I'll just sit here in my giddiness and enjoy it.
Maybe I'll go to the garage and lovingly caress my new desk a few times.