I've been writing on and off all morning, and I've noticed a dull throb beginning to build behind my forehead. The good news is, from my blessed cup of reheated Godiva coffee, I've noticed some pretty obvious structural issues. The voice, however, I'm having a problem with.
I've finished the twelve year old chapters, and am now working with a male fourteen year old narrator, and he's snarky, and superior and hardly speaks a word, so it makes it rather difficult for him to narrate action. How can he show and tell what's happening when he doesn't speak and he hates everybody? It's getting a little old. Hmm...Must rethink. Must stew.
I guess that means I'm done for today.
I've finished the twelve year old chapters, and am now working with a male fourteen year old narrator, and he's snarky, and superior and hardly speaks a word, so it makes it rather difficult for him to narrate action. How can he show and tell what's happening when he doesn't speak and he hates everybody? It's getting a little old. Hmm...Must rethink. Must stew.
I guess that means I'm done for today.
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